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| 3. The Docker container is destroyed. |
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Hmm, why is a period needed here?
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Ah, mistake on my part on mobile. The full context wasn't showing to mark all the steps, but a period should be used after an item in a list if every item is a sentence on its own. See https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/lists/numbered and https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/microsoft-365-life-hacks/writing/punctuating-bullet-point-lists.
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I can't add a comment to it, but L49 should read "Tooling runs as a one-off, short-lived Docker container:"
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L61 should read 'Therefore, it's fine if the code that runs at build-time is (relatively) slow.'
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L120 should read 'The reason "slim" variants are smaller is that they'll have fewer features.'
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L140 should read 'Distributions that use the apk package manager (such as Alpine) should use the --no-cache flag when using apk add to install packages:'
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L217 should read 'Its Dockerfile starts with a stage (given the name build) that installs those packages (via apk add) and then installs the libraries (via bundle install):'
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The prior line doesn't read "Reduce the cost". I don't think this needs "the" added.
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Sounds reasonable. Removed.
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L61 should read 'Therefore, it's fine if the code that runs at build-time is (relatively) slow.'
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L120 should read 'The reason "slim" variants are smaller is that they'll have fewer features.'
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L140 should read 'Distributions that use the apk package manager (such as Alpine) should use the --no-cache flag when using apk add to install packages:'
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L217 should read 'Its Dockerfile starts with a stage (given the name build) that installs those packages (via apk add) and then installs the libraries (via bundle install):'
Co-authored-by: András B Nagy <[email protected]>
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Ready for review Edit: added the first suggestion (a period should be used after an item in a list if every item is a sentence on its own) |
Co-authored-by: Victor Goff <[email protected]>
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Co-authored-by: Isaac Good <[email protected]>
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@BNAndras Whenever you're able, your review is still needed. |
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